not bad your voice sounds a bit different here. Your flow is pretty good and the beat is def hot. I'm feelin your hook, nice little banger shit. some of your last verse was sketchy when you pause I'd rather you just keep goin. but its coo though still fits. your lyrics was hot and the delivery wasn't bad. nice track yo
rtf here:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240650