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Old 03-26-07, 06:54 PM   #5
Jay Rose
I don't lose
 
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hahah....another jay rappin on this track....lordy lordy...yea nice concept but man, this beat needs to be shitted on....you just tell a story and dont do it justice..not to sound concited but check out how i hit this beat up...thas that kinda flow you need to hit this beat up with.....nice lyrics n concept tho...i just keep comparing it to my track n i dont think yours stacks up well .....
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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