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Old 03-29-07, 09:52 AM   #9
DaTrusHurtz
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Look man your doin the job sloppy, really quit because your game is ugly
You just dive into the meat of the cows way you casserole face in the pussy

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This kid aint a pimp, Sonny pick up chicks and get sum dome too
birds stay around dimes, like the homeless bitch in home alone 2
Been a hustler in the field, I know where to get da stacks
Dogg I'm Chris Leak your Tebo, you only get a few snaps
Destroy a bird when I hit it ,so send ya pimp game where the cemetary be
Sonny have lines of bitches spreading cheecks, like a woman's penitentiary

Tebo, I think u just struggled with the concept here as I'm guessing you haven't written too much self-glory before. Line i quoted was a cool concept. Don't think u used it well, but I quoted it anyway for the concept. Sonny, u were reallllly up and down as usual. Some very ehh and basic shit, but also some cool quotables. Honestly I thought u got this fairly easily.

Vote - Sonny
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