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...Belong...
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^ LMAO @ listen to Tupac and Biggie!!!
but yeah vocab DEFINITELY needs upping work on some wordplay coz it seems too direct try explaining the feelings you're puttin in this piece through metaphors bruv...
rhyming is too basic too, needs stepping up
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Originally Posted by High Dro
furthermore, june 3rd is the only good day to be born
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^ Amen Brother ^
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Originally Posted by ∆ P E X X
i'm still tryin to figure out how bein born in another country makes somebody fake.
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R.I.P OMB
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