hmmm needs some kinda intro or somethin
quality's good but accapella needed some layers, maybe doubles or somethin
flow's on point, dunno who this is on the hook but he got a catchy delivery. lyrics on both parts is sorta simple but like summers rhyme scheme, got a lil more complex than shear. not feelin the beat, shear got a lil off wit the flow like twice that i noticed but besides that it was on point. good shit

rtf please, i'd appreciate it

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240957

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