intro is hilarious lol hook is good but i think it coulda been much better w/ better mixing. very different from what i usually hear from you, not really feelin the beat, well....its just not somethin i'd try to pull off. verses ain't bad, seemed like a few lines were forced tho but flow was pretty much on point. lyrics was good "turn into a blade n run through you" lol dunno why but i liked that

rtf??

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240957

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