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Old 03-31-07, 02:17 PM   #9
DaTrusHurtz
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Stop freeposting guys. Anyway

DaTrus had no choice but to pick B-ball, u should be greatful n' be his lover
cuz if he chose baseball i'd bash ur head open,
...call me a true Louisville Slugger

vs.

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Ventice, unfortunately I don't think ur ready for this league, sorry. U don't have a sense of structure and rhyme scheme yet, let alone any witty punches. Maybe u should work in front lines and elevate and come back when ur ready. Zelph, ur verse wasn't that great either. Louisville slugger concept was good, but it could have been used a bit better. Also, some of ur shit was really basic, but maybe thats cuz of the opponent u were facing. Either way, Zelph got this easy.

Vote - Zelph
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