Thread: P.A. vs Shiest
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Old 04-01-07, 12:26 AM   #10
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Voted For: Shiest


Hey Yo Shiest, P.a. Defenitly To Nice, I Opperate On Artist With This Verbal Device...
Thats A Formal Introduction, Im Here Fo Ur Mic,treat You Like Prison Nigga, Make U My Wife...
***no wordplay and just a played out concept
Have U Sellin Ur Body So I Can Make It Through Life,
Pedal Hard On U Homie, Just Like A Bike...
Come To Ground Zero And Bring Out Da Light,
(((um what, no punch at all
I Dont Need To Be Blood Or Crip To Make Me Feel Safe In My Life...
I Dont Need To Bring Another Nigga To A Gun Fight, Just Come Out Swinging All Lefts And Rights...
***these are like lyrics with no punch
And You 7-0 And Im 0-0, When U Seen My Flow, Ur Self-esteem Went Low...
Young Boy, I Heard U Aint Even Got Da Denerio, U Probally Dont Even Have A Connection Down There In Ground Zero...
***stretched and the da nero wordplay woulda been dope but u didn’t use it
Ill Bring Da Snow And Make It Below Zero, Ill Love To Open Up His Frame, Give A Lost To This Lame...
Treat Him Like A Dame, Destory Him With My Brain, Deadly Flow Homie, To Hard To Tame...

Remember This Pimpin, Me And U Aint Da Same, U Just A Pawn, Im Da King Of This Game...
)))u gotta have wordplay and a diss here son
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vs.
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Look,
We can see P.A's making a Public Annoucement
By coming out the closest, this faggots about it
Homie's soft, ur humps are nothing without Kink
Thats why girls close you off...
...More than Open Mic Threads Without Links
&&& pretty dope, good line here w/ the close off wordplay
Speaking of Threads your verses are deemed wack
'Cos The only thing you eat is your negative Feedback
***lame, how is the only thing u eat being feedback a diss. If your lead in was like, dude too poor to buy a meal or sumin it would be a diss
I could let you win this battle with a minimal payment
'Cos it insults me battling foes who spits from theirs anus
((((lame, cuz zeke says so
Ripping up herbs should be a bill passed to the constitute
For your words mean shit...
...Like Blood Stained Tampons of a Prostitute...
()()))))how does words meaning shit and prostitues tampons have anything in common?... alme cuz zeke says so

vote- shiest…. For….
Homie's soft, ur humps are nothing without Kink
Thats why girls close you off...
...More than Open Mic Threads Without Links
^^^ the one actual punch in the battle
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