alright im listenin cuzz

nice intro, i'm def feelin ya flow. but yo man you talk gangsta way to much man, i dont care if you'se or you aint, i'd just like to hear you talk different man. try it for once man, it'd probably help you find some different style fans as well. but yo your hook is catchy and the beat is pretty good. overall its a good track fa sho but its just that you should really try somin diff

rtf here http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241039

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