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Old 04-03-07, 04:10 PM   #9
DaTrusHurtz
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one good year THATS all the success youve made?
imma sweep the floor with butler, like i wanted to take up your trade
reporters said the team was fragile & soft in the paint..
word was you lacked-size,, n accordin to ya bitch u could always relate
then you lost to the gators,, them niggas shitted
coach almost made u run suicides, im jus close to makin grams commit it

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Grams, first thing i saw from ur verse was u said verse of the week so I was expectin' a lot, but honestly u didn't have anything quotable. I tried to find something, but couldn't. lol. Some of ur shit was just statements like the surrender to mid major thing and AJ Graves line. Then, some of it just wasn't true like the shitty sports things and strugglin' in the big 12, they went 14-2, they didn't struggle at all. lol. The rest was just not thtat witty and had nothing that stood out to me.

DiZzy, I really liked ur verse. U were supposed to more just diss Butler, not diss Grams and Butler, but ur shit still hit pretty nicely. Every line in ur verse was at least average and nothing was bad at all. The lack size line hit nice cuz Butler has no one taller than 6'7, other 2 lines i quoted were simple but nicely worded. You could have had more creative concepts, some of it was kinda basic, but all nicely executed so u got this.

Vote - DiZzy
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