eh kind of weak battle here.


Pop-nothing too special from you man. i've seen better. Your usually more focused then this. I liked the buck eyes line. worded pretty solid. The car/title line was good, was a different way of usin the concept, but you worded it poorly. overall 1 punch i'd quote from you.

GC-After readin pops verse i thought you'd win, but it didn't turn out that way. Overall real weak verse. That strucure doesn't work out for you man, neither does it work for anyone else. it throws off the whole line. This kind of structure is only good if only used in 1 or 2 bars at the most. Your opener had potential, but was worded poorly.



v/pop

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