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Old 04-03-07, 10:48 PM   #12
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Grams. i have to pretty much agree with trus on this. Too many statements and not enough punches. Most of your lines were worded poorly, and didn't make sense. I think you could have done better, and the fact that some of the people in this league actually watch these games, didn't help the fact that you made statistics up about them. this was ok at best, nothin special.

Dizzy-u impressed me man, i think your whole rhyme scheme was good. everything flowed smoothly and you did a good job dissin both your opponent and the team. Punches were descent. 2 quotables that i seen.


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