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Old 04-03-07, 11:30 PM   #4
Jay Rose
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you start off seperated.....not really your style....your voice sounds exasperated.....i feel the beat is a lil lame.....you just dont sound like you in this one...not nearly as good as other stuff...feels like a half assed song.....butt on the positive side i gotta ask what you do to your hooks, the reverb on em all make it sound real good they stand out in a good way
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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