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Old 04-03-07, 11:34 PM   #11
Jay Rose
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ight well the beat has a nice vibe to it...but i dont like the sample in the hook, actually i dont really like the hook....your flow on this is okay in spurts but it feels like you gotta slow it down a bit more....your quality is still somethin you gotta work on....prah's quality sounds better then his usual put next to yours....haha i do have to crown prahject the adlib king...haha its def is trademark...haha....never fails....pretty good average verse from him....not a bad peice....but still room left to improve
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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