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Old 04-04-07, 11:49 AM   #8
DiZzy
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From: New Jerz
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When bigger foes come at u, u run away far n' it seems
U backup so much, i'm reminded of the biggest flaw of ur team

^This was good because of the situation. Good doing research with the quote
Our PG can take urs 1-1 easy, don't even keep score, loner
Earl Calloway could serve Rice like chinese restaurant store owners

^Nicee, again you have good knowledge of the topic so you did good here

You could have done better with the punch about them having 6 losses in the ACC. ranked/own city punch also could have done better and your closer was decent. Overall good verse man and I do know you drop a whole lot better than this lol

Vs

and fuck ohio state, cuz we all know they havn't been good in the recent...
oh shit.. sorry truz... felt an urge to diss a team that's actually decent

^haha that was funny/creative

Other than that your verse lacked hard hitting concepts. It seems like you rushed it. I'm not going to say much because it just comes down to having weak concepts

v/Trus
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