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Old 04-04-07, 03:10 PM   #2
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Well this is pretty good for a first drop. Your rhyme scheme was pretty good, it flowed alright. Ya had some metaphors..kind of funny. All n all keep elevatin. Just didn't like the diss sayin your not impressed by all of us..haha
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