you start off with a nice idea for a flow on this track...you just dont nail it at the beg, as you warm up you fall into it more naturally....i think it just has to do how comfortable you were with the stop n go flow....same with the beg of the second verse....i unno, with how i know you are, you should sound a lil more smooth....i like the singer, but what he is sayin is kinda like blah blah cliche, this track just feels like that old sayin, close but no ciguar....i feel you almost nailed it down, and with a lil more work you could but you dont have it there yet.....i feel you coulda came more personal and more into it....i feel you can do more with this man

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