Tebo, once again your tryin to hard. Just think more about what your writin. You had good concepts, but nothin came out strong. Personals punches could have been better if you worked more on wordplay. overall eh verse from you.


Out-nothin real special about your verse either. A couple things showed potential, but just like tebo. you have to word your lines better. You as well have potential. keep it up, and i see you ellevatin.

v. out.

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