This was pretty nice man. You had some wicked meta's in here. I really liked your rhyme scheme, the way you interpreted it to flow dope as fuck, ahh. Sweeet. You started spittin fast as hell to in the second verse, that was crazy. Cause you got every last syllable out of each word. Lyrically I liked what your sayin. Lol. It's some good shit. Mad me laugh a few times, too. Btw, the beats raw as fuck. I would'nt mind throwin some lyrics on a beat like that.

Overall, I liked it, alot. Definatly a song I'd add to my playlist. Keep it up bro.

Rtf,
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241113
Thanks dawg.