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I don't lose
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IP:
ight the beat is a lil simple to me...i unno, you need to bury the vocals more in the track....the effect on the hook isnt good at all....but otherwise its fine....like they said throw a lil more emotion into it and your golden....some little things to fix up but you'll get hang of it
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead
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