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I don't lose
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IP:
ight well your quality sounds better thats a plus....but you seem hesatant like theres not much flow, just you sayin things.....are you still reading?.....you are still annunciating things too much....the hook gets blah.....the toilet seat line is played....i unno i dont like this that much...the beat is good, but repatative...needs more in it....not that bad still not there yet, you are improving tho
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead
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