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Old 04-05-07, 11:42 PM   #8
TonyTone
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quality actually isnt what's bringin this down but just that the vocals are too loud. like q said, flow is very simple but atleast you stay on point unlike ppl who try to make their rhyme scheme complicated and can't even stay on beat lol n werd again to q, spit like your nas or some shit, cockiness is a good thing. beat's not my style, too simple for me. hook just needs better mixing n some adlibs. the hook's actually a bit too quiet. switch the volumes of the hook and verses lol but damn, if this were my 1st track i'd prob be twice as good now cuz shit, fact is half the audio heads online dont even sound this good
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