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Old 04-06-07, 12:48 PM   #4
Konflick
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This was feedback posted for Tha_Don_of_Mics

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I don't know if you tryed but it seemd like you didnt. This verse was weak. Like, I could see you know how to make wordplay - And maybe you choose not to make it workout. But I don't know.

Bad verse. I bet you could do better.
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