My bad. I accidently clicked reply.

Aphs:
I don't know if you tryed but it seemd like you didnt. This verse was weak. Like, I could see you know how to make wordplay - And maybe you choose not to make it workout. But I don't know.

Bad verse. I bet you could do better.

Capo:
You're verse was terrible and have the shit didn't rhyme. You're new, it looks like. But I dont really have advice. Just keep practicing, you'll get the hang of it.

V/ Aphs.


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