Yo Kool, this shit aint bad, u got a nice rhyme scheme which is good to see, you show good concepts and ideas in this rap, man,

"if yall though you were part of something then think again cuz your an exception,
the only part everyhuman on earth is part of is the fucking great deception,"

I liked that line dogg, keep it up yo.

Peace

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