Listenin'..

Beat is hot..

You sound a lil like Ike...

Verse - it's decent...you held down the verse better than ure hook...you tried to south it up..and it didn't fit atall...flow was basic but didn/t fall..

Hook - You tried..adlibs were right..but it felt too controlled...You shuda added sum breaths, some more adlibs in/bw and changed the mixing...it was just layered extra. The Hook needs to b 100 percent on a club track..it was like 45 here..so it ruined the rest of it..

But this wasn't bad nah mean...it was a decent attempt at gettin clubs jumpin and you had the right delivery/energy in the verses...6/10

The bridge was rlly messed up...the volumes were not right...but word holla

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