wow... it's been a while since i was that passionate about anything... i like the pauses, and you planned the end of each stanza well, same topic, different aspect... not sure i completely follow tho, what did the 'drowning in the air' part mean in the beginning?

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

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