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Old 04-08-07, 03:12 PM   #20
Konflick
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Stubbs. Your verse was alright. I meen, nothing hot - At all. But some ok concepts I guess? Some punches had potential to land but never did. You need to work alot on rewording. Don't take this personally, I'm just being honest. But I think you can do better.

K-awdik. I didn't even finish reading your verse. The first like, 4 lines and I stoped. It was pathetic, and terrible. I don't know if you did this as a joke, but if your being serious - I feel bad for you. Elevate dude, alot.

V/ - Stubbs.

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=241140

^Please,
Thankyou.
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