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Old 04-08-07, 07:58 PM   #8
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Voted For: Konflick

Wow, kind of weak battle here.

Kon-you got great concepts man. I liked your overall ideas. You just need to work on your wording. Your bars are potentially dope, but your not following through. you either got a good set up, and a bad landing. or the other way around


God-ok verse here, nothin special. you need more in your lines. Your verse wasn't consistent enough. Not enough personals. punches weren't really all that hard. i've seen better from you if your the Rizo from rb.

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