I don't lose
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IP:
word up i remember doin that scary movie shit with you when i first was startin off....lets see how much you upped ya game.......
you still forcin some shit for the sake of your lyrics, n its bringin ya flow down a bit....at the beg...you still got pretty ill punches....it was short...which was lame, bump that up anoter verse or two i was just gettin into it....
not much wrong here cept at the beg of your verse it was a bit forced....your gettin more comfortable on the mic tho....your quality is a bit better n what not....i like this, its a nice lil joint shoulda been longer tho.....
rtf on LIGHTS OUT
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead
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