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Old 04-09-07, 12:53 PM   #3
Jay Rose
I don't lose
 
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haha, i like this....the first verse has a good flow....dont kill the DUBS but drop them down a db, the leaves are brown n no, fall type line....shame haha....nah the brag shit works out for this tho...its like the world is against me, im fighting back alone.....ya know? its good shit....it all works....you n your ka beats, just killin em
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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