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Old 04-09-07, 06:08 PM   #8
DaTrusHurtz
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LUDA wonders if ya got any friends but ehhhhhh answer is a Mos Def; NO!
& I ain't close to bein 'cha pal.......
Cause he musta felt bad for ya to let you on HIS show!

vs.

You ugly yo, I am a TALL glass of water, I ain't needing no luck
I'm glad you tried to Stand Up, though you're still short as fuck

This was kinda a weak battle. Tebo, ur chappelle show shit was cool, though a bit forced. Everything else u had was pretty awkwardly worded, though. Like ur shit doesn't directly hit. Also, u gotta fix ur flow up a bit, ur lines are too long, they just don't really read well. Get more to the point in less words. I also felt like a lot of ur concepts were all over the place.

Professor, not much of anything that quotable, but u did come consistent. Even the line I quoted was pretty simple and I wouldn't usually have quoted a line like that, but there wasn't much else to quote. Ciara shit i've seen a few times, pretty played concept. Really, all ur shit was too simple. Work on being more creative. The concepts aren't bad, but the way ya use them is too predictable, but u got this for being MUCH more consistent and on point.

Vote - Professor
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