pain is weakness leaving the body
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Voted For: Rizo*da*God
tech- real crazy, if not hot shit...
sit back and laugh I'll kill you in my sleep bitch
cuz ur weak you aint the heat with wot u speak
^doesn't rhyme... next time try to stay on topic a little better, and if dude's mom is ugly don't hit it, try to avoid playin urself in ur rhymes
Rizo- hmmm... liked ur verse, looks like a cute lil keystyle, nothing spectacular but no completely obvious flaws like tech... next time, try spelling right (like kid in the first line and infantry in the second from the last one) and you should be straight... solid, hard hitting, and added a couple personals... you get my vote
v/ Rizo
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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance
my poetry:
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