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straight outta cashville, nigga you heard? everybody say I'm the bomb
but tell me how you gon' make the song King Kong 'n not dedicate it to your mom
lol, i liked this line. Most mom jokes like this don't turn out well, but I really liked this one
yeah I seen the bitch and she hairy, and I'll turn her into a new fur coat
and yeah I get it, your chain hang low....but your dick sure don't
nahh, this was kinda too obvious and came off as gay
you can get buck with any music, as long as its good then just go along
so tell me why it seems that NOBODY ever gets buck to your songs?
This was wayy too simple. I wouldn't have used this line, but if I had, I woulda done it like a recall. A recall punch is when u say a phrase in a setup with one meaning n' then in the punchline use the same phrase word for word, but with a different meaning.. not sure if this is great, but somethin' like this:

I get buck naked with bitches when i glance at the hoes
U also get buck... like, AT BEST...1 or 2 fans at your shows
and people just rock to yo shit, they don't even know what they playin'
see I have a southern accent too, but people still understand what I'm sayin'
concept here is fine, but its too simple the way ya executed it, theres no wit. Try combining a cliche or some sort of wordplay with this personal to make it hit better. Even if u had said "We BOTH have southern accents... difference is, people actually get what i'm sayin'" that woulda been better, but this could be improved even more by some creative wit
but what am I botherin' with you for, you couldn't even get into G-Unit
but I wish I could be just like you...so people wouldn't ask me to make music
nah, this was stupid. Why wouldn't u want people asking u to make music?

Opener was strong, but u fell off after that. Some decent concepts, some were eh, just work on using more wit with your execution.