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Old 04-11-07, 06:28 PM   #9
DiZzy
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From: New Jerz
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Don't front you wack bitch cuz truth is I'm passin you man
Even X got his fingers crossed....
Like "I hope this bitch Pryce makes me look better than I actually am"

Sort of stretched but, overall funny. Could have been worded better but ok nonetheless.

That ya security in the back? I think its quite vigor of henchmen
It makes you look more retarded, standing at a fucking sticker convention

I thought this was your next best line it was direct but still didn't hit that hard

overall you could have been wayyy more creative. think outside the box i mean dam its dmx lol.

vs

usually i agree wit nas but its not that im bitchin
but hip hop isnt DEAD we just left The Game in a bad condition

good concept good wording good start

but after that you just fell hard. with more concepts along ^ those lines you could have won easily. some of your other punches like the vida line were just corny

v//rival basicly for more consistency
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