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Old 04-12-07, 11:11 AM   #14
DaTrusHurtz
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yeh you came outta brooklyn but we no you fake..
whan the last time you seen a 45 was on ya birthday cake

vs.

new york is baffled, you turned bitch and now ya done dude
how u a G, when u tat a girl on ya arm AND sign to the man who sonned you

Some close shit here. DiZzy had the line of the battle with that 45 line, surprised I ain't seen it, that was some funny shit. Out, that line i quoted was real talk, a nice personal. You had a lot of personals, but I felt most of them could have been executed with more wit. Just having personals isn't always enough, they gotta be funny too. DiZzy only had 1 line which I thought was quotable, but almost every line he had was at least average to decent. Out you had some stuff which was too simple/obvious like the opener and the line about taking his pic. I got DiZzy winning.

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