Terumoto: good rhyme scheme, good content, sum of it was very effectively done.... i can see it goin down on a beat nicely

Spartacus:

damn this was a low feel man, the emotion in there is like a dark sorrow that comes out tha words.... u can see a person from them in a perspective most people dont that makes this piece stand out a lot with such a simple wording technique

all in all tho im voting for Terumoto based on effort and consistency...