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Old 04-13-07, 10:52 AM   #9
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well thi swas eighter way and thomas...every one pre writes so WTF?!..lol...


Ter- your verse intriguied me very vividly with emotoin you had put in ya know;... yours was very original and you switched styles form last week just showing even more of why your a high prospct in this league man.. you showed creativity and wording very well and assorted nicely man it wasnt all over the place and the flow of htings went well too man nice job.

Thomas- your verse was great man really vibed to it.. it spoke with wit and humor aswell as madness and sarcasm man.. you did a excellent job in taking your topic and escalating it to another level man.. really man a nice job.

Overall- i was honestly feeling ter's vers emore.. idk i was just so into his verse... i read it like 3 times... in a row for 2 days straight now im serious.. dud eit was just compelling me to read man.. it dragge dme on the ground cus of the emotion he executed. both good drop sthough nice shit here
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