^agreed.

Pious-i see the potential in your wording. But all the dots..isn't good man.
it throws off ya scheme. Overall concepts were a lil basic. just keep workin
at it man. be a lil more direct.

Prycele$$-nothin too special from you. but you had some good attempts. Not sure
that i have seen the pots n pans line used in that way. so it was somethin different.
overall this weak. work on wording.

v/pry

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