waaaay too much "boom" in your mic...turn down the vocals and the bass


lovin the beat and the sample...a bit loop-ish...but cool

Why the drop out (pan right) 1/3 through? kinda threw me

are u flowin or talkin

actually...the drop outs are decent...


ur more talkin than flowin...if ur gonna do that, betta make sure ur delivery is spotless...it really wasn't


2nd flow was tough to hear...

hmm...interesting sounding track and creative....but flawed




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