wha the fuck is with you killin KA beats son?? on the screw you should lower one of the layers to a deeper....adds life to it.....pretty good first verse...you sound into it...needs a lil more directoin but the lyrics themself are hot....the carson jet, the only problem i have with it, is it didnt end hard...it just kinda ended n went into the hook, needed that final blow **FINISH HIM**(aint played that game forever) the third verse was nice too...just feel like this could be better if you had killer lines leading into the hook.....otherwise good shit...haha at the lil girls voice.....at least it sounded like that...yep...good shit, but i think you could still make it a lil better

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