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Old 04-14-07, 05:48 PM   #1
Paranoid
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you do know there is already a rapper named "Cage" right? anyway I'm def feelin the hook, for the first verse the vocals seem to loud dude and the quality sounds weak. , not that it sounds weak but it sounds like theres no reverb or nothin on it, just sounds plain. the flow is basic, but the lyrics are decent could just some more wittyness in there. the 2nd verse now the vocals are too low, the quality sounds coo though. lyrics was coo and the flow was a lot more fluent than the first verse. overall I'd say this a pretty coo track I was def feelin the concept as well.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...077#post3159077
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