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Old 04-14-07, 05:53 PM   #1
Paranoid
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damn i cant' believe you have no feed. alright I'm feelin this beat, its pretty coo. Your vocals seem a bit too loud but thats okay their not overexagerated. I'm def feelin this joint, I been naggin on you to say somin diff in ya shit and you changed a bit. Your lyrics is pretty coo man I'm feelin them and your flow is on lock like usual. I'm def feelin the verse, the hook is really dope i love that dudes voice. nice and catchy. 2nd verse is straight forward keepin it real. gunna's part of the verse kinda seems shaky, on the hook he sounded way better. he still sounds good on the verses but he just seem shaky on it, he has a dope delivery im def feelin his hook its really dope. lol his 3rd verse seems better, nice and fixed, flowin more fluent now. nice.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...077#post3159077
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