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Old 04-14-07, 07:00 PM   #10
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tony gets my vote here.....his wriiten verse was more on a complexed level and was more shown for creativity and foreground wording was nicely done man. his story and whole standard point was straight and got across even with a short piece gestures you did a nice topical drop but it was lacking a schemed story and a well used wording profession y aknow....it was creative but it felt like you were tryna sound smart not write so..

V/Tony
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