Voted For: Clokworx

damn @ how wack this battle was...

Legacy-work on your flow... first bar threw me off, then i got it, only to be threw off again by unneccesary "filler" words that added syllables and messed up your flow
example:
Now its the first Time I battled in a couple of months
So im gonna throw a hard 1-2 Punch

Clockworx- wtf is w/ ur second line? legs-you-see doesn't sound like legacy and registered nurse? where's the punch man! that almost cost you this one... i did like the last line tho, it was hotter than the rest of your verse... step ur game up a little, the only reason i'm giving you the vote is your opponent's verse was weak, not that yours came too hot...

v/ Clockworx

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