I'm def feelin this beat, I like your lyrics kinda goin wit that catchy club stil but mixed with a real beat. pretty cool mix dude, your a lot easier to understand on this joint. I like how when the beat does that pause you be like "wellllllll" lol pretty coo, and you switch ya flow up a lot. I'm def feelin ya lyrics and I'm def feelin the concept of this. the hooks pretty coo, it's simple but I like what you did wit it and the mixin put into it. 2nd verse is pretty straight forward as well. overall pretty dope track actually. but yo Q I was wonderin if you'd wanna do a track wit me dude? I found this beat by annon domini it's called "Life & times" I started writtin the shit, I got a hook and half a verse now, I was thinkin of someone to do a long verse wit me cause the verses are actually longer then 16's there like 24's or somin, I still aint figured out how long they really are but I know their longer then 16's but we've never done a track before and let me know if you up for it. holla

also rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241458

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