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Old 04-18-07, 06:53 PM   #8
Lyriclesolja
I Create Dope Poetry For The Thinkers Of Tomarrow....I Am Lyriclesolja
 
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Good Imagery, Bad structure, flow was kinda off...overall a decent drop 4/10
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Best line -
walkin through the maze trying to reach my goal
finding the key to success watchin the truth unfold-
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Worst line -
ready to face the lingering storms
never trusting anybody but myself cuz their truth is deformed
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Originally Posted by Indeph
Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.
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