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Old 04-19-07, 07:12 PM   #6
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eh. weak weak here. Nothing impressive @ all.
Prolly why theres no votes yet.

Lay- Your 1st punch was a good concept. I liked the idea you was tryin to point out
But i'm not sure if thats played out on Lampejo. Yet. Your wording needs to improve though. Lengthen ya lines up, and add more content. 2nd bar, was weak.

Lamp-Dude both of ya bars were played. Very poorly worded. Concepts overall were weak as well. Rhyme scheme was ok...The learn how to spell shit/rectum are some of the most played lines in text man.


v/Lay. By a small margin. both were weak. real close to decide on this...but i had to pick 1..no hate.
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