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Old 04-20-07, 01:35 PM   #5
Paranoid
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alright im listenin, beats kinda slow at the start and through out actually, It has a nice bass though, its decent. your flow is pretty good, pretty confortable for the most parts. lyrics is def lyrical but it kinda fucks the flow a little bit. your delivery is decent, could be better, but the emotion is good. 2nd cat kinda reminds me of a softer voice of Kontroverzey, but not bad. he switches his flow up pretty coo, lyrics is weak. delivery is pretty hot though. the emotion is good too. 3rd cat is pretty tight, lyrics is dope and the flow is smooth, kinda slow flow but it works. emotion seems low as well as the delivery. overal not bad track yall

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...090#post3161090
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