Wow, weak here. Didn't like either one you this week


Jay-1st punch was wack wack. I don't know if you were thinkin about brandon/ but as far as i know Jonathon's sister/if he even has a sister has nothin to do with rb/rv. Terribly worded. terrible concept just weak

John-No where near as good as last week. 1st bar was ok at best. Nothing special, could have been alot better. more statementish than punchish. 2nd bar same...wording was ok, but overall punch was weak..

Jay-2nd bar plllaaayeeed as all fuck. I know you do better then this on rb. Every punch you drop here, seems like your not even tryin. in my opinion. I hated this 2nd bar, basically just lost you the match.


v/John

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